Thursday, January 20, 2011

Cormac McCarthy--Author of Style

One of the authors I really like is Cormac McCarthy. I read his book The Road and was very impressed with his style of writing. In the book his writing is stripped down to the very bones. There are no quotations and the writing feels very fragmented. Usually this is annoying in books, but it adds so much depth to this book. The whole setting and landscape to the book is stripped of all life. It is set in a post apocalyptic world where a man and his son are traveling through the grey wasteland of what’s left. They must hide from the survivors and search for food and shelter as they try and make their way to the coast. An example of the text shows the bleakness of the book.

When he got back the boy was still asleep. He pulled the blue plastic tarp off him and folded it and carried it out to the grocery cart and packed it and came back with their plates and some cornmeal cakes in a plastic bag and a plastic bottle of syrup. He spread the small tarp they used for a table on the ground and laid everything out and he took the pistol from his belt and laid it on the cloth and then he just sat watching the boy sleep. He'd pulled away his mask in the night and it was buried somewhere in the blankets. He watched the boy and he looked out through the trees toward the road. This was not a safe place. They could be seen from the road now it was day. The boy turned in the blankets. Then he opened his eyes. Hi. Papa. he said.
I'm right here.
I know.

The style adds so much to the text. The run on sentences make you feel as if you are being drug through the book and the world within. They aren't fun to read and the
land created isn't a fun happy place. The short brief dialogue and short sentences show the bleakness of the situation and the dire straights that the man and his son are in.

Style

Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy

All happy families are alike, every unhappy family is unhappy in their own way. (First 14 words of the novel)

Oh my goodness, I love Tolstoy. He is mostly the reason why I changed my educational goals from a primarily math/science and business orientation to a literature/arts and writing orientation. A lot of the influence that fueled the change in me started with this line. It's relatively simple, but it causes one to reflect. He started his second of three novels, Anna Karenina after War and Peace, with this line and then spent the next 800 pages depicting 3 or 4 family units that support his opening statement.

I really liked his style of writing, it always makes the reader reflect on their own life and how they can improve and find joy in the simply ordinary tasks of life. In War and Peace he depicts his characters so well that you feel like they are real and even your friends now and today. You're constantly thinking about who you most resemble, Andre the outstanding war hero or Pier the rich, educated man with high ambitions though it plagued with failure. In Anna Karenina you wonder who you want to more better resemble in a relationship, Vronsky and Anna with their drama and ever-changing views of one another or Levin and Dolly with their simple, ordinary, boring, loving relationship. It seems that after his novels and after considerable reflection that Tolstoy teaches the reader and everyone that mediocre and simple lives and relationships are the ones that are most important to mankind. He exploits the beauty of happiness, of love, and of accomplishments and shows that these only come about with work and a better understanding of what they are.

A 300-page essay, entitled What is Art?, that he wrote later on in his life solidified these thoughts. He compared major works of art (painting, sculptures, and writing) to life itself. He stated something along the lines that life is not governed or defined by major events, such as weddings, graduations, parties etc. but in the small changes and the small details; therein lies the true beauty. Through his writing he has taught me to be more reflective and to enjoy the "simpleness" that every day brings.

Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Style

"But he wasn't fast enough. Mariam saw. A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain, and Mariam caught a glimpse of what was beneath the tree: the straight backed chair, overturned. The rope dropping from a high branch. Nana dangling at the end of it."

If anyone has already read this book they may already recognize that this passage happened within the very first ten chapters of this book. It may seem intense, but for me, this is what kept me wanting to continue reading. I needed to know what happened next, and i am still needing to finish this story.
The author Khaled Hosseini is a man who is originally from Kabul, Afghanistan. He lived most of his childhood there and had experienced more than what most people would. For this purpose i believe that his writing has a much stronger impact on his readers than other authors.
He uses words that may be foreign to some, but in his writing he explains them in a way that is easy and clear for anyone who is reading. It makes the reader need to pay more attention to the detail and small passages throughout the story. Otherwise, there are important moments that will be missed and the story will be harder to understand. Typically, if the reader gets lost throughout the story, it is the writers fault. However, the story is clear enough and the fault will lie on the reader if they get lost.
Overall, i am really enjoying the story, and the author has me wanting to read more. I may not totally understand the culture behind the story, but i am learning.

Thinking About Style -- Rachel


"She could ask for anything, she thought dizzily, anything--an end to pain or world hunger or disease, or for peace on earth. But then again, perhaps these things weren't in the power of angels to grant, or they would already have been granted. And perhaps people were supposed to find these things for themselves."

-- City of Glass, Cassandra Clare

The reason why I consider Cassandra Clare to be fantastic writer is because she can implant an idea in so few words. While reading her books the reader can almost miss all of the little concepts that she would weave into her story. Inside her entertaining stories she weaves spiritual concepts and ways to improve as an individual.

Her style is noteworthy because every page in the book describes an event down to the detail. She uses vivid words, or phrases that can invoke the emotion that she wants her readers to feel. Her descriptive style can make the reader almost feel like they are there with the characters.


J.D. Salinger. A Perfect Day for Bananafish:

“There were ninety-seven New York advertising men in the hotel, and, the way they were monopolizing the long-distance lines, the girl in 507 had to wait from noon till almost two-thirty to get her call through. She used the time, though. She read an article in a women’s pocket-sized magazine, called “Sex Is Fun-or Hell.” She washed her comb and brush. She took the spot out of the skirt of her beige suit. She moved the button on her Saks blouse. She tweezed out two freshly surfaced hairs in her mole. When the operator finally rang her room, she was sitting on the window seat and had almost finished putting lacquer on the nails of her left hand.

She was a girl who for a ringing phone dropped exactly nothing. She looked as if her phone had been ringing continually ever since she had reached puberty. “


J.D. Salinger is best known as the author of The Catcher in the Rye, but he was also an accomplished short story writer who contributed many stories, including this one, to The New Yorker magazine. Unfortunately this comes as news to most people who were forced to read The Catcher in the Rye in high school and never ventured into the school library to find out more about the author and found Nine Stories by J.D. Salinger.


What I love about this passage, the opening two paragraphs of Bananafish, is the way that Salinger uses details to really create a scene. For example the number of ad men present isn’t necessarily relevant to the story, but by mentioning that there are ninety-seven the reader is forced to imagine ninety-seven men in suits milling about the hotel. Salinger also pointes out that the girl, who’s name isn’t immediately known to the reader, is staying in room 507 a detail that makes the hotel a large one in our minds with at least five floors or more than five hundred rooms. As the scene develops we learn that the girl is waiting for a long-distance phone call, which piques the readers interest to continue reading the story to find out who this girl is willing to wait over two hours to talk to. Salinger then explains how the girl used the time and proceeds to give an account of her activity. He begins every sentence in the sequence with the pronoun “she” giving the list a monotonous feel to it. I personally love the second paragraph because Salinger is able to give a very descriptive description of the girl using an irregular method. It is likely that the reader has never thought of somebody as somebody who looks as if her phone had been ringing continually since puberty, but knows exactly what that means when read. I admire that in any art form, the ability to convey meaning in unconventional ways and J.D. Salinger is a master at it. Read the complete story, you won’t be disappointed.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Kacy's Thinking About Style post

"When a person really desires something, all the universe conspires to help that person to realize his dream."

--Paulo Coelho, The Alchemist

I love everything I have read by Coelho, and I think that is because I feel like I can get out and accomplish anything after I have read something of his. Coelho intertwines spirituality and self discovery in a way that you can't help but quote him and feel like you want to go on and discover your own Personal Legend.

Stylistically he does this fairly efficiently, simply concentrating on the story's message rather then scene-setting, which I think molds the desire I get to discover these places myself rather than be told about them. He gets straight to the plot in the story however, the dialog is full of anecdotal and abstract theologies which again as the reader I have to interpret and discover for my self.

Paulo Coelho writes in such a way that he sets the frame for us and allows us to interpret and discover the rest for ourselves. This is a hard style to copy, but I can emulate this storytelling when appropriate.

Thinking About Style



Beauty by Robin Mckinley


"The ground was carpeted with petals, and yet none of the flowers were dead or dying; they ranged from buds to the fullest bloom, but all were fresh and lovely. The petals he and the horse trampled underfoot took no bruise." (p. 71)

Beauty is a book filled with wonderful descriptive settings. Mckinley used vivid descripiton and detail that allows the reader to truly experience the setting. However, she dosn't allow these descriptions to take away from the story line. This is shown wonderfully when Beauty's father comes to the rose garden. Because these details arn't distracting from the plot or the characters. Instead it gave the reader an improved understanding of the enchantments that this mysterious castle holds, "the petals...took no bruise". I would like my writing to reflect this style because I feel it is important to keep the reader captivated in the writing. I don't want to lose my reader throught too much detail, but instead use detail to further explain the concepts I'm trying to convey.

McKinley, Robin. Beauty: A Retelling of the Story of Beauty and the Beast. Harper. 1978.


Rapunzel by Paul Zelinsky

"In a rage, she seized the braids and coils of Rapunzel's silky hair and sheared them off" (p. 23).


Words choice is a great way that Zelinsky improved the story of Rapuzel. He made it more enjoyable because the language used is filled with imagery. Through using words like seized, coils, silky, and sheared the reader can experience rather than just comprehend this scene. The phrase silky hair gives the reader the impression that the hair was beautiful and valued. The word sheared is most commonly used when cutting sheep wool, chippy and uneven. This gives the reader a sense of curtness; not caring how the hair came off, just so long as it did. The use of vocabulary is of great importance in writing. There just wouldn't be as much meaning if the text had read, "and the sorceress cut her hair". I want the word choice in my writing to be a carefully written as Zelinsky's.

Zelinsky, Paul O. Rapunzel. Illustrated by author. Dutton Children's Books, 1997.

Kacy's Found Poem

To me writing is like...
a job
a mental release
a record of my life

inspiring our present and future.

Writing is a way to make ideas, memories and thoughts immortal

but pictures are always more descriptive.

Monday, January 17, 2011

I know, it sounds like everyone else's

Words are magical things,

They help us to remember in this forgotten world.

Words are what make our thoughts and ideas immortal,

Constantly inspiring our present and future.

Words, the endless flow of emotion.

Words are magical.
Thoughts once unspoken are later heard,
As good-byes no longer stay permanent.
They create a way to not be forgotten.
Instead, immortality is gained,
Through thoughts and ideas as a flow of words.
Writing even inspires the present and the future of many.
In the end, words are an endless flow of magic.

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Writing

Entering a world of pain,

Where most things are considered in vain.

Exposed, nowhere to hide,

A place where small details subside.

Feeling naked and alone on stage,

The real tragedy is a blank page,

And a world without emotion,

A world without artistic motion.

NAKED.
ON STAGE,
IT WAS. . .
god's VOICE WRITTEN IN
RED INK ACROSS MY CHEST.

THESE WORDS.
ARE MYSTERIOUS
THINGS. . .
they. GLORIFY THE PAST.
they. VALIDATE THE PRESENT.
they. INSPIRE THE FUTURE.

A BLANK PAGE IS A WORLD OF HURT.
A BLANK PAGE IS A WORLD OF LIARS AND THIEVES.
A BLANK PAGE IS A WORLD OF DICE THROWERS AND SWORD SWALLOWERS.
A BLANK PAGE IS A WORLD ENDLESS GOODBYES AND UNSAID HELLOS.
exposed

Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Brenda's Found Poem

Writing
a way to be remembered
and never forgotten
Writing
the spreading of ideas
to countless eyes
Writing
goodbyes are never
Permanent

Monday, January 10, 2011

Updates and Feedback

Okay. I'm thinking we don't have time for the classmate bios, so don't worry about those. You have plenty to work with as far as choosing a topic for your opinion editorial and getting a start on your short personal piece.

What I'd like you to do this week, on or before Tuesday, 1/18 are three things related to the blog:

1) Respond to this post and give me some feedback about what we did on the first day of class--did it make it easier to get used to the idea of collaborating and reading your writing aloud? Was it a useful activity? Why/why not? I've never tried creating found poems on the first day before, so should I keep the activity or "sweep" it? I'll count your response (as well as all future responses) as part of your grade in the "Short Assignments" category described in the syllabus.

2) Instead of using the whole writing process to create and post a classmate bio, please revise your found poem on the subject of writing, and post it to the blog. Here's a revision hint: word choice is key in poetry--think about whether or not you're getting the most out of your words, and whether or not they're specific and meaningful. Also, when you revise, there should be significant changes made--maybe two or three lines need to be reworked, rearranged, etc. Email me your first draft, the one you did in class in about 5 minutes, so I can compare and search for evidence of revision.

3) Comment on at least three other poems that are posted.

Thank you! Let me know if you have questions.

Thursday, January 6, 2011

Meeting the Blog--which needs a better name, by the way. Any ideas?

Today I sent you invitations to become authors of the blog so that you can post responses, respond to others, extend the classroom into the wide world of the ether. This blog is an experiment. It has potential to be glorious, if everyone cooperates.

So, accept the invitation to be a contributor. You need to create a gmail account, if you don't already have one, to sign in and post on the blog.

Tuesday, January 4, 2011